The venue for my company workshop
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
If it is not Covid19, we will have to do workshop in the condo.
I had several workshop in the company. When I was in Sanofi, I went to shanghai in China. I stayed at the hotel named Westin. This hotel is 5 star level. So it was very expensive fee and very luxury interior.
In Korea, most of company go to workshop in Jeju island. Jeju is very beautiful place. So many tour persons go to there.
I love jeju too. I have been to there over 20 times
with My family, friends, collegue.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름], thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it. Keep on doing it. You\'re doing great. See you on our next class. Have a great weekend! -T. Jasper\\
Here are your corrections:
If it is not Covid19, we will have to do workshop in the condo.
>> If there\'s no Covid19, we will have our workshop in a condo.
>> I had several workshops in the company.
When I was in Sanofi, I went to shanghai in China.
>> CORRECT
I stayed at the hotel named Westin.
>> CORRECT
This hotel is 5 star level.
>> This hotel is a 5 star hotel.
So it was very expensive fee and very luxury interior.
>> So, it had a very expensive fee and it had luxurious interior.
>> In Korea, most of the companies have workshop in Jeju Island.
Jeju is very beautiful place.
>> Jeju is a very beautiful place.
So many tour persons go to there.
>> So, many tourists go there.
>> CORRECT
I have been to there over 20 times with My family, friends, collegue.
>> I have been there for over 20 times with my family, friends, and colleagues.
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