the village Hahoe(-maul = village)
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hi, Jane
He accompanied with Queen Elizabeth.
>> He was accompanied by Queen Elizabeth.
How can it be said that he was accompanied by Her?
He accompanied Qeen Elizabeth II who visited the Hahoe village.
Our government at the moment,reccomended him that he accompany Her as her entourage during her visting there.
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i missed a very important thing about the village.
it was a mask dance. there has been famous for the masks of Hahoe-talchum, that means a masked dancein Korean language.
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Hi Ms. [Name]!
Thank you so much for your composition today! I would also like to thank you for making things clear for me. Now I know that it was Queen Elizabeth who was accompanied by him. So the sentence should be, "He accompanied Queen Elizabeth." Take care and stay energetic!
T. JanE ^^
hi, Jane>> Hi Jane!He accompanied with Queen Elizabeth.>> He was accompanied by Queen Elizabeth.How can it be said that he was accompanied by Her?>> Correct.He accompanied Queen Elizabeth II who visited the Hahoe village.
>> Correct.
>> He accompanied Queen Elizabeth II when she visited Hahoe Village.Our government at the moment,reccomended him that he accompany Her as her entourage during her visting there.>> Our government at that moment, recommended him to accompany her as her entourage during her visit there.I missed a very important thing about the village.
>> Correct.It was a mask dance.
>> Correct.
there has been famous for the masks of Hahoe-talchum, that means a masked dancein Korean language.
>> It has been famous for the masks of Hahoe-talchum, that means mask dance in Korean language.
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