The war between Ukraine and Russia
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The war between Ukraine and Russia is a hot issue all over the world these days.
What I know may not be accurate information, but I know the reason for the war is about Russia\'s gas possession and trade.
But at the same time, I think Russia has a lot of greed for their country alone.
I wanted the Russian president to resolve it peacefully and I didn\'t look forward to breaking out a war.
It is very sad and unfortunate to be done so.
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Hi [이름] Ha!
I\'m glad that you are updated.
You told the story very well.
Hopefully, the war would end soon.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The war between Ukraine and Russia is a hot issue all over the world these days.
>> Correct
What I know may not be accurate information, but I know the reason for the war is about Russia\'s gas possession and trade.
What I know may not be accurate information, but I know the reason for the war is about Russia\'s gas possession and trade.
>> Correct
But at the same time, I think Russia has a lot of greed for their country alone.
But at the same time, I think Russia has a lot of greed for their country alone.
>> However, at the same time, I think Russia has a lot of greed in favor of its own country.
I wanted the Russian president to resolve it peacefully and I didn\'t look forward to breaking out a war.
>> I wanted the Russian president to resolve it peacefully and I didn\'t look forward to the breaking out of a war.
It is very sad and unfortunate to be done so.
I wanted the Russian president to resolve it peacefully and I didn\'t look forward to breaking out a war.
>> I wanted the Russian president to resolve it peacefully and I didn\'t look forward to the breaking out of a war.
It is very sad and unfortunate to be done so.
>> It is very sad and unfortunate that this is happening.
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