The was the worst experience you ever had with an old person?
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When I walked in the street with short skirt in winter. An old lady told me that why I wore that too short skirt in winter. Outside was not that cold, even in winter. Normally young lady wears short skirt. The old lady interrupted me that time.
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>> When I was walking on the street wearing a short skirt in winter, an old lady asked me why I\'m wearing a short skirt in winter.
Outside was not that cold, even in winter.
>> It was not that cold outside at that time in winter.
Normally young lady wears short skirt.
>> It\'s normal for young ladies to wear short skirt.
The old lady interrupted me that time.
>> CORRECT
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