The way I enjoy spending time at home is…
학생이 쓴 원문
The way I enjoy spending time at home is through hobbies. My hobbies are knitting, listening to songs, eating snacks, and watching dramas. When I\'m alone at home, I watch TV shows and eat snacks. Even something as simple as this can make me happy at home. We don\'t have to be fancy!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The way I enjoy spending time at home is through hobbies.
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My hobbies are knitting, listening to songs, eating snacks, and watching dramas.
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When I\'m alone at home, I watch TV shows and eat snacks.
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Even something as simple as this can make me happy at home.
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We don\'t have to be fancy!
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