The way I made my weekend fruitful.
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I usually have part time job in weekend on semester, however, I study in weekend during a vacation. In this weekend, I practiced the piano and painted a picture with water color. Also I met my friends and we went to a escape room cafe. It was not really fruitful, but I enjoyed the time absolutely.
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HI [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T.Gabby :)
I usually have part time job in weekend on semester, however, I study in weekend during a vacation.
>> I usually have a part time job during weekends every semester, however, I study in weekend during vacation.
In this weekend, I practiced the piano and painted a picture with water color.
>> This weekend, I practiced the piano and painted a picture with water color.
Also I met my friends and we went to a escape room cafe.
>> Also I met my friends and we went to a room cafe.
It was not really fruitful, but I enjoyed the time absolutely.
>> It was not really fruitful, but I absolutely enjoyed our time together.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.