The way to keep going

2023-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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Firtst of all, I tend to maintain my commitment to goals by two solutions. Firstly, No doubting to my goal is important. I have a belief that although a momentary challenge come to me, I solve the problem and finally achieve in something. Secondly, positive thinking is also significant. I need to meditate myself with thought that solutions are always around with me. If you tell yourself in this way continuously, goal will be achieved in short time.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Yu [이름]!

Keep going and never stop!

-Hanna ^^

Firtst of all, I tend to maintain my commitment to goals by two solutions.

>>First of all, I tend to maintain my commitment to goals through two key strategies.
Firstly, No doubting to my goal is important. 

>>Firstly, maintaining unwavering belief in my goal is crucial. .

I have a belief that although a momentary challenge come to me, I solve the problem and finally achieve in something.

>>I firmly believe that despite momentary challenges, I can overcome them, solve problems, and ultimately achieve success.
Secondly, positive thinking is also significant. 

>>Correct.

I need to meditate myself with thought that solutions are always around with me.

>>Constantly reminding myself that solutions are always available around me is essential. 

If you tell yourself in this way continuously, goal will be achieved in short time.

>>By consistently affirming this mindset, goals can be achieved in a relatively short period.

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