The way to maintain business call
학생이 쓴 원문
It is difficult to realize whether people focus on our calling when we just use phone. So in my case, i realize whether people focus on through their voice. If one’ voice sound like loose, arrogant, i can figure out he or she doesn’t focus on my calling. So when you have a business calling, you polish your voice either.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mark, good day! It is hard to communicate on phones sometimes. We cannot if the person we are talking to is really listening or paying attention to what we are saying. We will talk about it in class. I will see you then. Take care!~T. Lyn
It is difficult to realize whether people focus on our calling when we just use phone.
>>It is hard to realize people are focused on our calling when we\'re just on the phone.
So in my case, i realize whether people focus on through their voice.
>>So in my case, I realize that people focus through their voices.
If one’ voice sound like loose, arrogant, i can figure out he or she doesn’t focus on my calling.
>>When someone\'s voice sounds loose and haughty, he or she isn\'t focused on our conversation.
So when you have a business calling, you polish your voice either.
>>We need to speak and listen attentively when we have business calls.
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