The way to relieve my stress
학생이 쓴 원문
When I get stressed in the office, I do an exercise after work.
After exercising hard, I don\'t think about stressful things that happened in the office anymore.
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I am glad that you made it here again on the composition page.
Coping with stress is a lesson that they do not teach in school. Yet, it can impact our lives greatly if we do not know how to handle our stressful situations well. Hence, we need to aim for balance and boundary to know our limitations and strengths in dealing with challenges.
Congratulations for these two perfect sentences. They were well-written and composed.
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-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
After exercising hard, I don\'t think about stressful things that happened in the office anymore.
>> Correct!
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