the ways to overcome the challenge
학생이 쓴 원문
To achieve the goal i want, i always should work hard. there are some people who make it easily. but i am not that type.
I retook the test to enter the naval Academy when i was high school student
사관학교를 들어가기 전에도 나는 이 학교에 오기 위해서 시험을 두번 쳤다.
there is not time when i am such nervous
지금까지 인생이 불안정한 때는 없었다.
To achieve my goal, something i am able to do is to study.
내가 원하는 목표를 이루기 위해서 했던 것은 그저 공부하는 것이었다.
I just worked hard even though i was nervous about my unknown future and i was not sure whether this way is correct.
막연한 미래가 불안하거나 지금하고 있는 것이 맞는지 의심이 들어도 그냥 공부했다.
There are various ways to overcome the challenges in the world
여러가지 방법들이 있다. 어려움들을 극복하는 세상에는
I think there is nothing like Just Do It in Nike advertisement for way to overcome challenge
나에게는 나이키의 그냥해라 하는 격언만큼 좋은 방법은 없다고 생각한다.
As we just do it, we get to know the way
그냥 하다보면 방법을 알게 된다.
강사 첨삭
You deserve a snappy salute from me, [이름]! Your determination and persistence are worthy of emulation. As the wise old saying goes, \"No pain, no gain!\"-Faith-
To achieve the goal i want, i always should work hard. >> To achieve the goal I want, I should always work hard.
there are some people who make it easily. but i am not that type.
>> There are some people who can make it easily, but I am not that type.
OR I am not one of those who can easily achieve goals.
I retook the test to enter the naval Academy when i was high school student
>> I retook the test to enter Korea Naval Academy when I was a high school student.
there is not time when i am such nervous
I retook the test to enter the naval Academy when i was high school student
>> I retook the test to enter Korea Naval Academy when I was a high school student.
there is not time when i am such nervous
>> There was no time that I was not nervous.
To achieve my goal, something i am able to do is to study.
>> To achieve my goal, the only thing that I was able to do was to study.
I just worked hard even though i was nervous about my unknown future and i was not sure whether this way is correct.
To achieve my goal, something i am able to do is to study.
>> To achieve my goal, the only thing that I was able to do was to study.
I just worked hard even though i was nervous about my unknown future and i was not sure whether this way is correct.
>> I just worked hard even though I was nervous about my unknown future and I was not sure whether that way was correct.
There are various ways to overcome the challenges in the world
>> There are various ways to overcome the challenges in the world.
I think there is nothing like Just Do It in Nike advertisement for way to overcome challenge
>> I think there is no other better way like \'Just Do It\' in the Nike advertisement to overcome challenges.
As we just do it, we get to know the way
>> As we just do it, we get to know the way.
There are various ways to overcome the challenges in the world
>> There are various ways to overcome the challenges in the world.
I think there is nothing like Just Do It in Nike advertisement for way to overcome challenge
>> I think there is no other better way like \'Just Do It\' in the Nike advertisement to overcome challenges.
As we just do it, we get to know the way
>> As we just do it, we get to know the way.
OR Our actions will pave the way for our main goals.
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