The weather
학생이 쓴 원문
This summer,the weather is really weird.
It rains too much,I have never seen this kind of weather.
These days it was getting worse.
I have to carry my umbrella all the time.
Weather forcasts might not make sure the weather,because it is changing a lot.
It is more like tropical weather.
It is humid and hot.
In just one day,the weather changes all the time.
One rainy day,it raind heavily and I put on my rainboots.
However,two hours later it was so hot and I felt embarrased with rainboots.
The temperature is not normal,either.
It is too high,sometimes I could not breathe with hot air.
I hardly endure this summer.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! It was nice to see your composition again. Well, I agree that the weather this summer is weird because we can also feel the change here in the Philippines. It's what they call climate change. I hope it won't last long though. See you in class! __t.Karen__
Here are my corrections for you:
This summer,the weather is really weird.
>>Correct!
It rains too much,I have never seen this kind of weather.
>>Correct!
>>It rains too much,I have never seen this kind of weather before. -->Better
These days it was getting worse.
>>These days, it is getting worse.
I have to carry my umbrella all the time.
>>Correct!
Weather forcasts might not make sure the weather,because it is changing a lot.
>>The weather forecasts aren't sure because it is changing a lot.
>>The weather forecasters aren't sure about the weather because it is changing a lot.
It is more like tropical weather.
>>It is more like a tropical weather.
It is humid and hot.
>>Correct!
In just one day,the weather changes all the time.
>>Correct!
One rainy day,it raind heavily and I put on my rainboots.
>>One rainy day,it rained heavily so I had to put on my rain boots.
However,two hours later it was so hot and I felt embarrased with rainboots.
>>Correct! [However, rainboots is written as rain boots]
The temperature is not normal,either.
>>Correct!
It is too high,sometimes I could not breathe with hot air.
>>Correct!
I hardly endure this summer.
>>Correct!
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