The weather

2010-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Karen

학생이 쓴 원문

This summer,the weather is really weird. It rains too much,I have never seen this kind of weather. These days it was getting worse. I have to carry my umbrella all the time. Weather forcasts might not make sure the weather,because it is changing a lot. It is more like tropical weather. It is humid and hot. In just one day,the weather changes all the time. One rainy day,it raind heavily and I put on my rainboots. However,two hours later it was so hot and I felt embarrased with rainboots. The temperature is not normal,either. It is too high,sometimes I could not breathe with hot air. I hardly endure this summer.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It was nice to see your composition again. Well, I agree that the weather this summer is weird because we can also feel the change here in the Philippines. It's what they call climate change. I hope it won't last long though. See you in class! __t.Karen__   Here are my corrections for you: This summer,the weather is really weird. >>Correct! It rains too much,I have never seen this kind of weather. >>Correct! >>It rains too much,I have never seen this kind of weather before. -->Better These days it was getting worse. >>These days, it is getting worse. I have to carry my umbrella all the time. >>Correct! Weather forcasts might not make sure the weather,because it is changing a lot. >>The weather forecasts aren't sure because it is changing a lot. >>The weather forecasters aren't sure about the weather because it is changing a lot. It is more like tropical weather. >>It is more like a tropical weather. It is humid and hot.  >>Correct! In just one day,the weather changes all the time. >>Correct! One rainy day,it raind heavily and I put on my rainboots. >>One rainy day,it rained heavily so I had to put on my rain boots. However,two hours later it was so hot and I felt embarrased with rainboots. >>Correct! [However, rainboots is written as rain boots] The temperature is not normal,either. >>Correct! It is too high,sometimes I could not breathe with hot air. >>Correct! I hardly endure this summer. >>Correct!

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