The weather is too cold to go outside.

2019-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Your question about music CDs and mp3 files is a bit hard to answer. Recently I have not heard any of the songs from CDs and I only sang a song in garaoke. The advantage and disadvantage of music is hard to distingusish from the songs that I heard. I amn sorry for that. I sing a various pop songs and K-pop in garaoke but it's not excited. Thanks for reading. Bye.

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Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

Your question about music CDs and mp3 files is a bit hard to answer.

>> Your question about CDs and mp3 files is a bit hard to answer.

Recently I have not heard any of the songs from CDs and I only sang a song in garaoke.

>> I have not heard any of the songs from CDs and I only sang songs in the karaoke.

The advantage and disadvantage of music is hard to distingusish from the songs that I heard.

>> The advantage and disadvantage of music is hard to distinguish.

I amn sorry for that.

>> I am sorry about that.

I sing a various pop songs and K-pop in garaoke but it\'s not excited.

>> I sing various pop songs and K-pop songs in the karaoke but it\'s not exciting.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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