the week is already finished

The Wednesday comes. I think this day means start of week's end. There many other reasons for me to think like this. The Monday is terrible to almost people because of working. Passing the Tuesday, we usually think 'if Wednesday go away, Thursday will come and Happy Friday finally come. '(very subjective). For this reason, I have became the person thinking like this. In this week, my army does not plan a special thing like training. So I feel relaxed. Although my bosses hate me, I am a patient on back and there are no rights to them to make me work. Instead of ordering, they fumed the sense of inconvenience. I noticed that smell a long time ago, so I hide in crowds in method of not speaking. In this context, the thing the Wednesday comes means different to me. It means there only two days to face terrible bosses in army, and the weekend is coming. Even more, the friday is planned to go to hospital so I will not be in there. In conclusion, the Wednesday is happy day.

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The week is already finished.

CORRECT!

or>>The week is almost over.

or>>Another week has ended.

The Wednesday comes.

>>Wednesday is already here.

I think this day means start of week\'s end.

>>I think this day means, it’s the start of the weekend.

There many other reasons for me to think like this.

>>There are many other reasons for me to think like this.

The Monday is terrible to almost people because of working.

>>Monday is terrible to most people because of work.

Passing the Tuesday, we usually think \'if Wednesday go away, Thursday will come and Happy Friday finally come. \'(very subjective).

>>After Tuesday, we usually think, “If Wednesday is over, Thursday will come and finally, here comes ‘Happy Friday’”. (It’s my very subjective opinion).

For this reason, I have became the person thinking like this.

>>For this reason, I have become a person who thinks like this.

In this week, my army does not plan a special thing like training.

>>For this week, the army does not plan on doing any special trainings.

So I feel relaxed.

>>So, I feel more relaxed.

or>>So, I am more relaxed.

Although my bosses hate me, I am a patient on back and there are no rights to them to make me work.

>>Although my bosses hate me, I was a patient who just came back and they have no rights to make me work.

Instead of ordering, they fumed the sense of inconvenience.

>>Instead of ordering me around, they just fume at the sense of their inconvenience.

I noticed that smell a long time ago, so I hide in crowds in method of not speaking.

>>I noticed that a long time ago, so I hide in a crowd as a method of not having to speak.

or>>I smelled it a long time ago, so I hide in a crowd as a method of not having to say something.

In this context, the thing the Wednesday comes means different to me.

>>In this context, the thing about the Wednesday coming means different to me.

It means there only two days to face terrible bosses in army, and the weekend is coming.

>>It means, there are only two days left to face my terrible bosses in the army, and then comes the weekend.

Even more, the friday is planned to go to hospital so I will not be in there.

>>One thing more, on Friday, I am scheduled to go to the hospital, so I will not be here.

In conclusion, the Wednesday is happy day. 

>>In conclusion, Wednesday is a happy day for me.