The Whale's Dream

2011-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

when you are in some far away bitch if you can see whale please shake your hands to him him could well know you, and him may be me I'm fallin love again you are ocean i'm one very small whale who swiming in ocean I'm fallin love again why oh why hide and seek,, Why can't you understand me~♪

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [Name] and Composer,                  Thank you so much for this wonderful song that you translated. I love it! I love it more when you sang it in the class. You are a very good and diligent student. I hope you won\'t forget me when you are already an artist. -Verna-   when you are in some far away bitch >>When you are in a far away beach.if you can see whale >>If you can see a whale.please shake your hands to him >>Please shake hands with him.him could well know you, and him may be me>>He may know you well, and he might be me.I\'m fallin love again you are ocean >>I fall in love again, you are the ocean.i\'m one very small whale who swiming in ocean >>I\'m a very small whale whose swimmingi n the ocean.I\'m fallin love again why oh why >>I dall iin love again. Why? Oh! why?Hide and seek,, Why can\'t you understand me?~♪ >>Correct  

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