The winter was almost gone
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening.
Well, in the Philippines, it is getting cold already.
But, it is much colder in your country.
So, warm yourself up and don\'t get sick. Always take care.
I will see you in class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
In Korea,it is winter.
>> Correct
I know your country season is summer.
>> I know that it is summer in your country.
I hate summer.
>> Correct
I think your country is warm and humid and very impatient because of the weather.
>> I think that in your country, it is warm and humid and I believe that most people there are becoming impatient because of the weather.
Winter is very cold.
>> Correct
This winter is very cold winter.
>> This winter, it was very cold.
Some people dead because of cold.
>> Some people died because of the cold weather.
But I think at home we can keep a little warm.
>> But, I think we can warm ourselves a little at home.
I played with my friend.
>> Correct
I like going to school.
>> Correct
Stay at home is really annoy.
>> Staying at home annoys me.
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