The Wisdom of History, Fermented Food

2012-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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The Wisdom of History, Fermented Food is very good. i like kimchi and bean paste soup this is really korean food please eat this food you too!!

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Hi there, John! Thank you for dropping by. I am very happy to help you with all your English transaction. I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good start! You made a very comprehensive answer to the homework. Let\'s work hard together for your improvement. We can do it! Take care and have a wonderful day! T. Kate^^ Here are my corrections for you: The Wisdom of History, Fermented Food is very good. >> The Wisdom of History, Fermented food is very good. >> Fermented food is very good according to \"The Wisdom of History\" i like kimchi and bean paste soup this is really korean food please eat this food you too!! >> I like kimchi and bean paste soup, this is really a Korean food. Please try to eat this food too! (Please take note on your sentence structure. Avoid sentence fragment)

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