The Wisdom of History, Fermented Food.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today's MondayIt's rainy.But today's also hot.
Today's I read 'The Wisdom of History, Fermented Food.'.
This stories very interested.I like kimchi.But I like very much pizza!!
And I like very much Hong oh.It's smell very terouble.But I like it.
Teacher!!!Do you like kimchi and pizza and Hong oh?
THis stories very hungry.Pictures looks like very delicious.
Hmm...But I don't like DwenJang.DwenJang is delicious.
But I don't like it.Not cause.
강사 첨삭
Hi baby ANNA^^
Thank you for your composition^^ You made me happy today. Great job^^ You were able to express yourself well. I like Kimchi and pizza. You made me hungry^^ I haven\'t tried Hong oh and DwenJang.Is it delicious?I wanna try it^^ Thank you for giving me an idea. I miss you baby^^ Kamsahamnida for being a sweet student.
Teacher Nina
Today\'s MondayIt\'s rainy.
>>Today was a rainy Monday.
OR >>Today was Monday and it was raining.
But today\'s also hot.
>>But it was a hot weather too.Today\'s I read \'The Wisdom of History, Fermented Food.\'.
>>Today I read \'about The Wisdom of History, Fermented Food.\'.This stories very interested.
>>These stories are really interesting,
I like kimchi.
>>Correct
But I like very much pizza!!
>>But I pizza more.
OR >>I really like pizza.And I like very much Hong oh.
>>I also like Hong oh.
It\'s smell very terouble.
>>The smell was really terrible.
But I like it.
>>CorrectTeacher!!!Do you like kimchi and pizza and Hong oh?
>>Correct
OR >>Teacher!!!Do you like kimchi,pizza and Hong oh?THis stories very hungry.
>>These stories makes me hungry.
Pictures looks like very delicious.
>>The pictures looks very delicious.Hmm...But I don\'t like DwenJang.DwenJang is delicious.
>>But I don\'t like DwenJang.DwenJang but it is delicious.But I don\'t like it.
>>Correct
OR >>I don\'t like the taste.
Not cause.
>>I don\'t know the reason.
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