The word \"ageism\" has been invented to describe discrimination against older people. In what ways
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I think the prejudices against older people are rampant in our society.
I also have the prejudices that they are inflexible and old fashioned.
I\'m ashamed to say but unconsciously I think older people are less capable than younger people.
But I also will be old and the number of older people goes up so I think we have to see older people without any prejudices and respect them.
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I think the prejudices against older people are rampant in our society.
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I also have the prejudices that they are inflexible and old fashioned.
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I\'m ashamed to say but unconsciously I think older people are less capable than younger people.
>>> I am ashamed to say but unconsciously I think older people are less capable than younger people.
But I also will be old and the number of older people goes up so I think we have to see older people without any prejudices and respect them.
>>> CORRECT =)
>>> OR: But I also will be old and the number of older people will continue to go up so I think we have to look at older people without any prejudices and respect them.
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