The world which animals rule
학생이 쓴 원문
If the world ruled by animal, probably eating meats would banned.
And then they start forcing people to become vegetarians.
In addition they might eat people to revange...
And they would build some human zoo and train us to do some circus for them.
강사 첨삭
This is good material and idea dear! haha! We won\'t be forced to be vegetarians. We will be their food!!! ^_^
If the world ruled by animal, probably eating meats would banned.
>> If the world was ruled by an animal, probably, eating meat would be banned.
And then they start forcing people to become vegetarians.
>> And, they will start forcing people to become vegetarians.
In addition they might eat people to revange...
>> In addition, they might eat people to get revenge.
And they would build some human zoo and train us to do some circus for them.
>> They might build some human zoo and train us to do some circus for them.
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