the worst class ever I've ever had

2010-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

학생이 쓴 원문

It's the worst class ever I've ever had! I wanted to tell u much more about singers!! but I couldn't remember any words or sentences that I have to say! oh...It was terrible! I'm ashamed of it :( I should have practiced more before taking ur phone call! If I were you,I would give her 2 stars! Having a cold,I thought my pronunciation was weird,but u gave me 5 stars out of 7 stars in pronunciation part. hmmm It's also kind of weird. P.S I surprised again that you knew about what I really intereted in!! Becuase even my friends did't know Adam Lambert! I like YOU !! [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I honestly think your pronunciation sounded great inspite of your cold. Actually, I didn't notice that you were having a cold and I think your pronunciation is one of your strongest points because you try your best to speak like a native speaker.  Well, you did well in class and I am very sincere about that. I was very happy to know that you liked Adam Lambert! I wanted him to win too! You surprized me when you told me that you like "crying" by Aerosmith because I play the song on my ipod everyday!   Anyway, these are my corrections:   It's the worst class ever I've ever had! >>correctI wanted to tell u much more about singers!! >>correctbut I couldn't remember any words or sentences that I have to say! >>correctoh...It was terrible! I'm ashamed of it :( >>correctI should have practiced more before taking ur phone call! >>correctIf I were you,I would give her 2 stars! >>If I were you, I would give myself 2 stars!Having a cold,I thought my pronunciation was weird,but u gave me 5 stars out of 7 stars in pronunciation part. >>I'm having a cold, I thought my pronunciation was weird, but you gave me 5 stars out of 7 stars in the pronunciation part.hmmm It's also kind of weird.>>Hmmm, it's also kind of weird. P.S I surprised again that you knew about what I really intereted in!!>>I was surprized again that you knew about what I am really interested in! Becuase even my friends did't know Adam Lambert! >>correctI like YOU !! >>correct[이름]

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