The Worst News
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The worst news which I heard in Korea is baseball news. It was about my favorite player will leave my favorite team. I was realy sad when I heard the news because I am not able to watch my favorit player’s play in my favorite baseball team since next year.
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Hi [이름]:)
That sounds awful. :( I\'m sorry to hear that.
The worst news which I heard in Korea is baseball news.
>> The worst news that I have heard is the one about baseball.
It was about my favorite player will leave my favorite team.
>> It is about my favorite player leaving my favorite team.
I was realy sad when I heard the news because I am not able to watch my favorit player’s play in my favorite baseball team since next year
>> I was really sad when I heard the news because I will not be able to watch my favorite player play starting next year.
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