The worst phobia is…

2023-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I think the worst phobia would be fear of heights. This is because if you have a fear of heights, you won\'t be able to go well if your friend\'s house is in a high apartment, and you won\'t be able to enjoy the rides well even if you go to an amusement park. My mom has a fear of heights and she gets scared whenever she goes up high. And the most common phobia in Korea is the fear of heights.

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~ Teacher Tricia


I think the worst phobia would be fear of heights. 
>>> I think the worst phobia would be the fear of heights. 

This is because if you have a fear of heights, you won\'t be able to go well if your friend\'s house is in a high apartment, and you won\'t be able to enjoy the rides well even if you go to an amusement park. 
>>> CORRECT!

My mom has a fear of heights and she gets scared whenever she goes up high. 
>>> CORRECT!

And the most common phobia in Korea is the fear of heights.
>>> CORRECT!

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