the worst problem
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The worst problem I\'ve ever had in my life is a broken bone. I like to ride a bicycle. When I was in high school, I used to ride a bicycle to relieve my stress. But I fell down by mistake while riding a bicycle. So my collarbone is broken. I went to the emergency and was hospitalized for a week. It took about two months to get better.
In the meantime, I couldn\'t study properly at school. Classes and exams are very important in Korea. So I was nervous. So I ate healthy food and followed the doctor\'s advice to recover quickly. I studied with my eyes because I was not good at taking notes. I was able to get a good score on the test by trying so hard.
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Hi Yeong! ^^
Oh no! That sounds awful. You should be more careful in riding your bicycle. :( Good thing you\'re okay now.
>> The worst problem I\'ve ever had in my life is having a broken bone.
I like to ride a bicycle.
>> CORRECT
When I was in high school, I used to ride a bicycle to relieve my stress.
>> CORRECT
But I fell down by mistake while riding a bicycle.
>> CORRECT
So my collarbone is broken.
>> So my collarbone got broken.
I went to the emergency and was hospitalized for a week.
>> CORRECT
It took about two months to get better.
>> CORRECT
In the meantime, I couldn\'t study properly at school.
>>In the meantime, I couldn\'t study properly in school.
Classes and exams are very important in Korea.
>> Classes and exams are very important in Korea so I was nervous since I couldn\'t attend any.
So I was nervous.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
So I ate healthy food and followed the doctor\'s advice to recover quickly.
>> CORRECT
I studied with my eyes because I was not good at taking notes.
>> I studied with my eyes because I wasn\'t able to take down notes.
I was able to get a good score on the test by trying so hard.
>> CORRECT
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