The worst thing I have ever done
학생이 쓴 원문
The worst thing I have ever done was that I believed my wife and thought she could manage it when she was scammed 20 milion won in a way that somebody is insisting her account was used illegally so that all the money should be withdrawn and protected safely.
It was the day of my medical license exam and I was very exausted so I believed her even when she could not awnser my phone call, but saying by text message that she could not call me back for over 3 hours.
I doubt she might have been involved by the famous scamming method but I thought my wise and smart wife would not become a victim of such a easy fraud;amazingly, she did!
강사 첨삭
Oh my! Is this true? That is a very big amount of money. How did you manage to solve this problem then? Anyway! Your power of managing and connecting clauses are awesome! This is actually really good. Thank you for trying to tell me what happened in 3 sentences. You didn\'t beat the purpose. Amazing. :)
The worst thing I have ever done was that I believed my wife and thought she could manage it when she was scammed 20 milion won in a way that somebody is insisting her account was used illegally so that all the money should be withdrawn and protected safely.
>> The worst thing I have ever done was that I believed my wife and thought she could manage it when she was scammed 20 million won. In a way that somebody insisted that her account was used illegally, so that all the money she has should be withdrawn and protected safely.
It was the day of my medical license exam and I was very exausted so I believed her even when she could not awnser my phone call, but saying by text message that she could not call me back for over 3 hours.
>> It was the day of my medical license exam and I was very exhausted, so I believed her even when she could not answer my phone call. In the text message she sent though, she said she could not call me back for over 3 hours.
I doubt she might have been involved by the famous scamming method but I thought my wise and smart wife would not become a victim of such a easy fraud;amazingly, she did!
>> I doubted that she might have been involved in a famous scam but I thought my wise and smart wife would not become a victim of such an easy fraud; amazingly, she did!
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