The worst wedding ceremony I\'ve seen
학생이 쓴 원문
I attended a wedding ceremony of an academy director. He hired a famous comedian to preside his daughter\'s wedding. Many people came to see the wedding or the comedian. During the ceremony, the comedian made the guests laugh with his brilliant skills. Those who attended were fascinated with what he said. Some seemed not to be interested in the newlyweds. After the ceremony, some people were busy with getting his signature. I felt bad.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I would agree with you! Even though the guests had so much fun at the wedding because of the comedian, it\'s sad that the comedian stole the spotlight from the newlywed couple. It should have been their day.
- T. Caitlyn
I attended a wedding ceremony of an academy director.
>> CORRECT
He hired a famous comedian to preside his daughter\'s wedding.
>> He hired a famous comedian to preside over his daughter\'s wedding.
Many people came to see the wedding or the comedian.
>> Many people came to see the wedding and the comedian.
During the ceremony, the comedian made the guests laugh with his brilliant skills.
>> CORRECT
Those who attended were fascinated with what he said.
>> CORRECT
Some seemed not to be interested in the newlyweds.
>> CORRECT
After the ceremony, some people were busy with getting his signature.
>> CORRECT
I felt bad.
>> CORRECT
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