The zoo helps animals.
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Thank you for taking the time to write an essay about this topic.
I agree that zoos can be of help to animals although most of them don\'t provide the ideal environment for the animals.
I still believe that the best way to protect the animals is to stop destroying their natural habitat.
Anyhow, that\'s just my point-of-view.
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The zoo can helps animals.
>> The zoo can help animals.
It can be a home for endangered species or animals that have nowhere to live.
>> CORRECT!
At first, the zoo would have been built for viewing purposes.
>> At first, a zoo is built for viewing purposes.
However, humans destroyed nature, leaving no place for animals to live.
>> However, humans have destroyed nature, leaving no place for animals to live.
So it seems that it was forced to protect animals, not the original purpose.
>> So it seems that they are now forced to protect animals and not serve its original purpose.
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