Their, There or They're!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Their dog is a husky called Snowy.
2. There once was a bird called a Dodo.
3. My aunt and uncle are arriving today.They're coming from New York.
4. Many years ago there weren't any cars so people used to travel by horse and carriage.
5. Our neighbors have bought a second car.Their new one is red.
Hi Jane. I read your advice today that you uploaded on the feedback. As your advices, I will try to be exposed to English more and correct my errors. I know your concerns about being stressful for using English. But Don't worry^^. I'm a positive person.haha.
Oh, today my friend who just married send me a massage from Hawi. She went an aquarium and she kissed a dolphine in there! What a fantastic experience I think. Acutually she really really like animals. She is a nurse like me, but her dream was to be a zookeeper.^^ Sometimes I want to go to the aquarium in Hawai. Oh. It's time to bed~ byebye
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Thank you for doing your homework.You got all the answers. It\'s good that you are taking my advice because it is a sound one. . Anyway, about your friend, I think she is really having a nice time. Kiss a dolphin! I agree, it is a fantastic experience! I also hope I can do the same thing. See you in class!
T. Jane
1. Their dog is a husky called Snowy.
>> Correct!2. There once was a bird called a Dodo.
>> Correct!3. My aunt and uncle are arriving today.They\'re coming from New York.
>> Correct!4. Many years ago there weren\'t any cars so people used to travel by horse and carriage.
>> Correct!5. Our neighbors have bought a second car.Their new one is red.>> Correct!Hi Jane. I read your advice today that you uploaded on the feedback.
>> Correct!
As your advices, I will try to be exposed to English more and correct my errors.
>> As you have advised,I will try to be exposed to English more and correct my errors.
I know your concerns about being stressful for using English. But Don\'t worry^^. I\'m a positive person.haha.
>>I know your concern about my being stressed out in using English. But don\'t worry. I am a positive person.Oh, today my friend who just married send me a massage from Hawi.
>>Oh, today my friend who just married sent me a message from Hawaii.
She went an aquarium and she kissed a dolphine in there!
>> She went to an aquarium and she kissed a dolphin in there!
What a fantastic experience I think.
>> Correct!
OR: >> I think it is such a fantastic experience.
Acutually she really really like animals.
>>Actually, she really really likes animals.
OR:>> >>Actually, she likes animals very much..
She is a nurse like me, but her dream was to be a zookeeper.
>>Correct!
^^ Sometimes I want to go to the aquarium in Hawai. Oh. It\'s time to bed~ byebye
>>^^ Sometimes I want to go to the aquarium in Hawaii. Oh. It\'s time to go to bed~ Bye bye.
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