There are a lot of activities.
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Jean
I prefer the personal activity like talking with you in english etc.
>> I prefer doing personal activities like talking with you in English, etc.
It\'s fun and interesting since I have known the english.
>> It has been fun and interesting since I have learned the English language.
You always treats me kindly,I have thanks about that.
>> You always treat me kindly, I have to thank you for that.
In school days, I often participated group activites like a boy scout and so on.
>> In my school days, I often participated in group activities such as boy scout and so on.
Now I am nearly forgotten about those old good memories.
>> Now, I have nearly forgotten those good old memories.
>> or: My memories of the old days are almost faded.
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