There are four couples, not five.

2011-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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1st couple, they are the same ages. The husband doesn't have responsibility for a father and a husband. Stock is only his interest. So his wife can't help being a family supporter. She usually ignores and looks down on him. 2nd couple, a husband is 18 years younger than his wife. They look like a son and his mom. He is too childish and she doesn't put make-up anymore. he sometimes goes out with a woman and she nags him like his mom. I'm worried about that he will dance with another lady after the program finishes. 3rd couple, they look like a couple barely. He is a DJ and too brusque. His wife doesn't do a role as a wife. She isn't good at cooking and house chores. I think the important thing is that they don't have a baby. The laste one in my next composition :D

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Hi [이름]! These are bizarre couples. I wonder what will happen next. kk -Tiny^0^ 1st couple, they are the same ages. >>The first couple are of the same age.The husband doesn't have responsibility for a father and a husband. >> The husband is an irresponsible father and husband. Stock is only his interest. >>correctSo his wife can't help being a family supporter. >> So his wife can't help being the family supporter.She usually ignores and looks down on him. >>correct2nd couple, a husband is 18 years younger than his wife. >>The second couple, the husband is 18 years younger than his wife.They look like a son and his mom. >>They look like mother and son. >>They look like son and mom.He is too childish and she doesn't put make-up anymore. >>correcthe sometimes goes out with a woman and she nags him like his mom. >> He sometimes goes out with a woman and she nags him like his mom. >>(It’s just the capital letter at the beginning or your sentence.) I'm worried about that he will dance with another lady after the program finishes. >> I'm worried that he will dance with another lady after the program finishes. 3rd couple, they look like a couple barely. >>The third couple barely look like a couple.He is a DJ and too brusque. >>correct His wife doesn't do a role as a wife. >>His wife doesn’t do her role as a wife.She isn't good at cooking and house chores. >>correctI think the important thing is that they don't have a baby.>>correctThe laste one in my next composition :D >>The last one will be in my next composition. :D >>spelling check: last

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