There are four couples, not five.
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1st couple, they are the same ages.
The husband doesn't have responsibility for a father and a husband. Stock is only his interest.
So his wife can't help being a family supporter.
She usually ignores and looks down on him.
2nd couple, a husband is 18 years younger than his wife.
They look like a son and his mom.
He is too childish and she doesn't put make-up anymore.
he sometimes goes out with a woman and she nags him like his mom.
I'm worried about that he will dance with another lady after the program finishes.
3rd couple, they look like a couple barely.
He is a DJ and too brusque. His wife doesn't do a role as a wife.
She isn't good at cooking and house chores.
I think the important thing is that they don't have a baby.
The laste one in my next composition :D
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Hi [이름]!
These are bizarre couples.
I wonder what will happen next. kk
-Tiny^0^
1st couple, they are the same ages.
>>The first couple are of the same age.The husband doesn't have responsibility for a father and a husband.
>> The husband is an irresponsible father and husband.
Stock is only his interest.
>>correctSo his wife can't help being a family supporter.
>> So his wife can't help being the family supporter.She usually ignores and looks down on him.
>>correct2nd couple, a husband is 18 years younger than his wife.
>>The second couple, the husband is 18 years younger than his wife.They look like a son and his mom.
>>They look like mother and son.
>>They look like son and mom.He is too childish and she doesn't put make-up anymore.
>>correcthe sometimes goes out with a woman and she nags him like his mom.
>> He sometimes goes out with a woman and she nags him like his mom.
>>(It’s just the capital letter at the beginning or your sentence.)
I'm worried about that he will dance with another lady after the program finishes.
>> I'm worried that he will dance with another lady after the program finishes.
3rd couple, they look like a couple barely.
>>The third couple barely look like a couple.He is a DJ and too brusque.
>>correct
His wife doesn't do a role as a wife.
>>His wife doesn’t do her role as a wife.She isn't good at cooking and house chores.
>>correctI think the important thing is that they don't have a baby.>>correctThe laste one in my next composition :D
>>The last one will be in my next composition. :D
>>spelling check: last
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