There are four seasons in Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are four seasons, spring, summer, autumn and winter in Korea.
I think it is the best thing to exist four seasons.
It is warm and flowers bloom a lot in spring.
It\'s hot in the summer, but we have vacations and we can swim in the sea.
There are various kinds of fruits in autumn.
Finally, we can look at the snow and make snowmen.
What a wonderful and admirable sight!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
This is a simple expression of your ideas.
However, you did a great job!
I hope you can continue working hard.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are four seasons, spring, summer, autumn and winter in Korea.
>> There are four seasons in Korea and they are spring, summer, autumn and winter.
I think it is the best thing to exist four seasons.
I think it is the best thing to exist four seasons.
>> I think having four seasons is the best.
It is warm and flowers bloom a lot in spring.
It is warm and flowers bloom a lot in spring.
>> Correct
It\'s hot in the summer, but we have vacations and we can swim in the sea.
It\'s hot in the summer, but we have vacations and we can swim in the sea.
>> Correct
There are various kinds of fruits in autumn.
There are various kinds of fruits in autumn.
>> Correct
Finally, we can look at the snow and make snowmen.
Finally, we can look at the snow and make snowmen.
>> Finally, we can look at the snow and make snowmen in winter.
What a wonderful and admirable sight!
What a wonderful and admirable sight!
>> Correct
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