there are many books in a book store,

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there are many books in a book store, which talk about the factor of successful life.

>> There are many books in the book store which talks about the factors to have a successful life.
Yes, I also read that kinds of book to achieve rich life and comfortable life.

>> Did you mean: I also read kinds of books which talked about how to achieve a rich and comfortable life.
Maybe we try to find the factor even though we don\'t know what is the \"successful life\".

>> Did you mean: Maybe we try to find the factors to know what is the true meaning of a \"successful life\".
That\'s true.

>> Correct!

Many author write their book in many ways but these point out \"What is the definition of your successful life?\"

>> Many authors write their book in many ways but to point out this, \"What is the definition of a successful life\"?
Many writers said, It is important to live your own life no matter what others say about your dream.

>> Many writers said, \"It is important to live your own life no matter what others say about your dream.\" 

I\'m not sure I\'m living a successful life.

>> Did you mean: I\'m not sure if I\'m living a successful life.
but even now, I try to find my way to successful life.

>> But I still try to find ways to have a successful life.

>> OR: But I still try to find ways to live a successful life.
Maybe, soldier is not my way to live successful life, but I will do my best to make a successful life!

>> Maybe, being a soldier is not the way to live a successful life, but I will to my best to have it.

>> OR: Maybe being a soldier is not the way to have a successful life, but I will do my best to achieve it.