There are many different things I do outside the house

2019-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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There are many different things I do outside the house. So, I would like to introduce this today. I\\\'d appreciate it if you could watch it. First of all, there\\\'s a cleaning. There are other things that this cleaning is done either by staying at school or doing one\\\'s own job. Or, we can create a program called \\\"One Person 1 Station\\\" and select the number of people to clean up this month. I clean this a lot. Why do I clean so much? The reason is because of my teacher. My teacher buys delicious food to good cleaning friends for a month. It\\\'s not just jelly or snack, it\\\'s chicken, snack or pizza. I clean a lot of things because you bought me a lot of different and expensive things. As above, there is cleaning representative of the housework I do outside the house. Thank you so much for watching this.

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There are many different things I do outside the house.

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So, I would like to introduce this today. I\\\'d appreciate it if you could watch it.

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 First of all, there\\\'s a cleaning. There are other things that this cleaning is done either by staying at school or doing one\\\'s own job.

>>> First of all, there\\\'s cleaning. There are other things that this cleaning is done either by staying at school or doing one\\\'s own job.


 Or, we can create a program called \\\"One Person 1 Station\\\" and select the number of people to clean up this month.

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I clean this a lot.

>>> I clean a lot.


Why do I clean so much?

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The reason is because of my teacher.

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My teacher buys delicious food to good cleaning friends for a month. It\\\'s not just jelly or snack, it\\\'s chicken, snack or pizza.

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 I clean a lot of things because you bought me a lot of different and expensive things.

>> I clean a lot of things because my teacher brings me a lot of different and expensive things.


 As above, there is cleaning representative of the housework I do outside the house. Thank you so much for watching this.
>>> As stated above, there is a cleaning representative of the housework I do outside the house.


Thank you so much for watching this.

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