There are many things in my wish list.

2010-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

I told you my boy friend is going to America for a seminar. I hate parting with him but I like to choose good things. Last year, he was backpacking through Europe with his laboratory friends. When he came back to me he gave me many things for my birthday present & souvenir. So I am expecting something. Um...actually he opened his heart not long ago. He want to buy a 'i pad' which is apple's ambitious work and he is a i phone 4 user already. So I have best control my desire for him. If possible I'll prepare some money for his little wish. Anyway the grumpy guy start getting my back up. uh...I hate him ㅡ.ㅡ

강사 첨삭

Hi J!! TGIF of course it is hard to be away with our loved ones. But don't worry as you have said it will only be for 8 days. ^^ Guys seldom make wishes, but if they do, wow, it is almost impossible to give them what they wish for. They are as complex as women. ^^ Have a great weekend J! And finish your wishlist on time. Ha ha?lt;?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" Lei J I told you my boyfriend is going to America for a seminar. >>correct I hate parting with him but I like to choose good things. >>I hate parting with him but I like to look at the brighter side/things. Last year, he went backpacking through Europe with his laboratory friends. >>correct When he came back he gave me many things for my birthday present & souvenir. >>correct So I am expecting something. >>correct Um...actually he opened his heart not so long ago. >>correct He wants to buy an 'i pad' which is apple's ambitious work and he is an iphone4 user already. >>correct So I have best control my desire for him. >>So I need to control my desire for him. If possible I'll prepare some money for his little wish. >>If possible, I'll save some money for his little wish. Anyway the grumpy guy start getting my back up. >>correct uh...I hate him ㅡ.ㅡ >>correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·