There are people who are anti-vaxxers. What do you think of them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think .
Probably, They seem to have had a painful experience after got the vaccine.
I know someone she has underlying disease
It worsened her\'s health. So she doesn\'t want to get vaccine.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Julia!
Yeah, I would agree with you that some people are anti-vaxxers because of the painful experience that they got. Did you know that some people are against of any vaccination due to their religious beliefs? Well, we\'ve got no right to judge them, but they should also repecvt those people who are willing to get any safe vaccination.
Enjoy the day!
Aki~
I think .Probably, They seem to have had a painful experience after got the vaccine.
>>> I think they probably have had a painful experience after they got the vaccine.
I know someone she has underlying disease
I know someone she has underlying disease
>>> I know someone who had an underlying disease.
It worsened her\'s health.
It worsened her\'s health.
>>> It worsened her health.
>>> Her healh has worsened.
So she doesn\'t want to get vaccine.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> So she doesn\'t want to get any vaccine (IF REFERRING TO ALL VACCINES)
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