There are several lessons I\'ve learned in life.
학생이 쓴 원문
It is so difficult to pick just one lesson among those. But if I should do it, I\'d like to say that not to lie to others is the wisest way to live happily. This means that it\'s about not deceiving others over anything. If I lie or deceive to others, rather I am more destressed.
강사 첨삭
Great job, Ju [이름]! Once again I appreciate you taking the time for the homework and sharing your thoughts on the topic. It is always a pleasure to learn from others and I agree with you. Nothing good can come out from lying or deceiving other people and I honestly do not understand people who do. Once again, I appreciate your effort and I look forward to our class tomorrow. Have a good night! ~Jane c\",)
There are several lessons I\'ve learned in life.
>> CORRECT =)
It is so difficult to pick just one lesson among those.
>> CORRECT =)
But if I should do it, I\'d like to say that not to lie to others is the wisest way to live happily.
>> CORRECT =)
This means that it\'s about not deceiving others over anything.
>> CORRECT =)
If I lie or deceive to others, rather I am more distressed.
>> If I lie or deceive others, I am more distressed.
There are several lessons I\'ve learned in life.
>> CORRECT =)
It is so difficult to pick just one lesson among those.
>> CORRECT =)
But if I should do it, I\'d like to say that not to lie to others is the wisest way to live happily.
>> CORRECT =)
This means that it\'s about not deceiving others over anything.
>> CORRECT =)
If I lie or deceive to others, rather I am more distressed.
>> If I lie or deceive others, I am more distressed.
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