There are various kinds of traditional drinks in Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many traditional drinks in Korea. The most famous and popular drink is a Sikhye made by rice and orher some cereals. The others are Sujeoggwa made by cinnamon and dried persimmon, and various tea including Omiza tea, ginger tea etc. Theses days I think young people also enjoy the Sikhye. Since we can drink it at Korean sauna, zzimgilvang, easily. So it is very common beverage for korean. Of course, most people may like Coke more.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Ju Yoeng. Thank you for sharing about the traditional drinks in Korea. I bet they are all delicious. But at the end of the day, yes, people still have their own preferences like coke. ^^ Have a wonderful weekend! ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
There are many traditional drinks in Korea.
>> CORRECT =)
The most famous and popular drink is a Sikhye made by rice and orher some cereals.
>> The most famous and popular drink is a Sikhye made from rice and some other cereals.
The others are Sujeoggwa made by cinnamon and dried persimmon, and various tea including Omiza tea, ginger tea etc.
>> The others are Sujeoggwa made from cinnamon and dried persimmon, and various tea including Omiza tea, ginger tea, etc.
Theses days I think young people also enjoy the Sikhye.
>> These days I think young people also enjoy the Sikhye.
Since we can drink it at Korean sauna, zzimgilvang, easily.
>> Since we can drink it at the Korean sauna, zzimgilvang, easily.
So it is very common beverage for korean.
>> So it is a very common beverage for Koreans.
Of course, most people may like Coke more.
>> CORRECT =)
There are many traditional drinks in Korea.
>> CORRECT =)
The most famous and popular drink is a Sikhye made by rice and orher some cereals.
>> The most famous and popular drink is a Sikhye made from rice and some other cereals.
The others are Sujeoggwa made by cinnamon and dried persimmon, and various tea including Omiza tea, ginger tea etc.
>> The others are Sujeoggwa made from cinnamon and dried persimmon, and various tea including Omiza tea, ginger tea, etc.
Theses days I think young people also enjoy the Sikhye.
>> These days I think young people also enjoy the Sikhye.
Since we can drink it at Korean sauna, zzimgilvang, easily.
>> Since we can drink it at the Korean sauna, zzimgilvang, easily.
So it is very common beverage for korean.
>> So it is a very common beverage for Koreans.
Of course, most people may like Coke more.
>> CORRECT =)
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