There is a lot of importance of rocks.
학생이 쓴 원문
A lot of people don\'t know what is importance of rocks, but I know, there is a lot of importance of rocks.
First, we can use for building a apartmant. Rock is very useful, so we can build a block with bricks.
Second, we can use for making a statue. Break it, throw it, touch it we can make anything!
Third, we can play with this rocks. If you use a small gravel idol, you can play like me. I play \"sujebi\" using gravel idol. Sujebi is a game in which gravel idol are thrown horizontally with a pond or sea to compete with how many gravel idol are thrown in the water. However, because this game must be played in a large plave or a place with water, it cannot be played without a narrow place or a lot or water like inside the house.
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
Wow, you know a lot of uses of rocks! I am so happy to read your explanation.
I never thought that there is also a game that we can play using gravel. Thank you for that new information.
With these, I must say- Maria, you rock!
-T. Donna =)
>> A lot of people don\'t know what is the importance of rocks but I know that there are a lot of importance of rocks.
First, we can use for building a apartmant. Rock is very useful, so we can build a block with bricks.
>> First, we can use it for building a apartments. Rock is very useful, so we can build a block with bricks.
Second, we can use for making a statue. Break it, throw it, touch it we can make anything!
>> Secondly, we can use it for making a statue. Break it, throw it, touch it we can make anything!
Third, we can play with this rocks. If you use a small gravel idol, you can play like me. I play \"sujebi\" using gravel idol. Sujebi is a game in which gravel idol are thrown horizontally with a pond or sea to compete with how many gravel idol are thrown in the water.
Third, we can play with this rocks. If you use a small gravel idol, you can play like me. I play \"sujebi\" using gravel idol. Sujebi is a game in which gravel idol are thrown horizontally with a pond or sea to compete with how many gravel idol are thrown in the water.
>> Third, we can play with this rock. If you use a small gravel idol, you can play like me. I play \"sujebi\" using gravel idol. Sujebi is a game in which gravel idol are thrown horizontally with a pond or sea to compete with how many gravel idol are thrown in the water.
However, because this game must be played in a large plave or a place with water, it cannot be played without a narrow place or a lot or water like inside the house.
>> Correct! Or: place (SPELLING)
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