There is many mountines in Korea.

2010-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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It is cold today again. Maybe it is -10 degree. It is 3 day cold, 4 day warm in winter in Korea. This is [Name]. Soon It will be Febrary, March. It will be warm more and more. I hope to be spring. At that time, snows melt and plants sprout and it is warm. Many people go to the mountine. They enjoy the flower, the sprout and the air. There is many mountines in Korea. 70% of Korean land is made of the mountine. Therefore Korean enjoy the mountine.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!   The weather here is also changing a lot.. It gets warm sometimes and then it gets cold again.. It’s so unpredictable… Anyway, we also have a lot of mountains here and I have a few friends who are mountaineers.. They say the view is breathtaking especially if you are on the peak of the mountain.. Do you also enjoy climbing up mountains or hiking?   T. Shy   It is cold today again. >> It is cold again today. Maybe it is -10 degree.>> Maybe it is -10 degrees. It is 3 day cold, 4 day warm in winter in Korea.>> It was cold for 3 days and warm for 4 days in Korea. This is [Name]. >> It is January. Soon It will be Febrary, March.>> Soon it will be February and then March. It will be warm more and more.>> It will be warmer and warmer. >> It will get warmer and warmer. I hope to be spring.>> I hope it’s spring. Many people go to the mountine.>> Many people go to the mountain.There is many mountines in Korea.>> There are many mountains in Korea. 70% of Korean land is made of the mountine.>> 70% of Korean land is made up of the mountain. Therefore Korean enjoy the mountine. >> Therefore Koreans enjoy the mountains.

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