There is many thing what we should do for our health..

2020-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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having a work out and get a good drink for our body is good for your health. To get a regular medical check is also make you to be healthy In our country, many people get a drink for their good health that is made by dog and turtle.. snake those thing came from our ancestor but that is not a good way and there is nothing to improve so I think the best way for keeping our health is having work out on everyday

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!

Thank you for sending your composition to me.

Certainly, there are many drinks made to make us healthy but nothing beats working out and eating healthy food.

Let\'s stay healthy and try our best to have an exercise and healthy diet. ^^

~Teacher Gina

There is many thing what we should do for our health..

>> There are many things that we should do for our health.

having a work out and get a good drink for our body is good for your health.

>> Having a workout and getting a good drink for our body is good for your health.
To get a regular medical check is also make you to be healthy

>> To get a regular checkup will also make you healthy.

>> Or: Getting a regular checkup also helps you in being healthy.
In our country, many people get a drink for their good health that is made by dog and turtle.. snake

>> In our country, many people get a drink for their good health that is made of dog, turtle or snake.
those thing came from our ancestor but that is not a good way and there is nothing to improve

>> Those things came from our ancestor but that is not a good way and there is nothing to improve.
so I think the best way for keeping our health is having work out on everyday

>> So I think the best way for keeping our health is having a workout everyday.

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