There is nobody do not like sale.
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you enjoy shopping for things on sale?
Sure. I like that.
I have a my rule about purchasing the products on sale.
Usually I see the original price first. If original price is cheap in that case I do not choice that.
And next, I see the discount rate. Always much discount is right one.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY. Thank you for this one.
- T. Beth
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Sure. I like that.>>> correct
I have a my rule about purchasing the products on sale.
I have a my rule about purchasing the products on sale.
>>> correct
Usually I see the original price first.
Usually I see the original price first.
>>> OR: Usually, I check the original price first.
If original price is cheap in that case I do not choice that.
>>> If the original price is cheap, in that case, I do not choose that.
And next, I see the discount rate.
>>> OR: And next, I look at the discount rate.
Always much discount is right one.
>>> Big discount is always the right one.
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