There is nothing that young people can teach older people.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A MAGNIFICENT Monday to us and our loved ones! ^.^
First of all, I would like to greet you a happy happy happy Monday! ^^
Sorry!
I repeated the word happy many times.
I am really glad that you made your homework.
Thanks a lot! ^^,
Anyway, I strongly agree with you.
I also think that the old are more experienced and knowledgeable.
However, most of them nowadays are somehow left behind because of the changes, especially about technology.
That\'s all for now! ^^.
Happy reading and see you soon! ^.^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
The old people know more about everything and on practical things.
>> The old know more about almost all things and practical things.
They have gained a lot of experiences over years in their lifetime.
>> CORRECT!
However, I disagree that there is nothing that young people can teach older people.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: However, I disagree that there is nothing that young people can teach to them.
First of all, the young people can adopt new technology faster.
>> First of all, the young can adopt new technology faster.
>> OR: First of all, the young can adapt to new technology faster.
Secondly, they know the changes and trends of the current world better than the old people.
>> CORRECT!
Finally, they are creative, motivated, therefore they offer a good suggestion which can change a lifestyle of people.
>> Finally, they are creative and motivated. Therefore, they can offer good suggestions which can change lifestyles of people.
>> OR: Finally, they are creative and motivated, so they can offer good ideas which can change people\'s lifestyles.
The old people have their own mind set, it is difficult for them to get along with young people.
>> Old people have their own mind set, it is difficult for them to get along with young ones.
The elders mostly ignore ideas of young people, even though it is correct.
>> The elders mostly ignore ideas of young people even though they are correct.
Because elders thought they are more experienced and knowledgeable than young people.
>> It is because elders think they are more experienced and knowledgeable than young people.
I think elders have many things to learn from young people and old people must recognize young people\'s abilities.
>> I think they have many things to learn from the young, and they must recognize young people\'s abilities.
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