There is this saying, \"To have a good friend, you need to be a good friend\". Do you agree with thi

2019-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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It\'s not easy to answer the question. To have a good friend, you need to be a good friend. I couldn\'t agree more. A lot of people say \"I want a good friend.\" That\'s all, they didn\'t do anything. It is a selfish. Being good friend is something different. I think that good friend is good listener and understand of heart. And we need love. So, someone want to be a good friend, they have to be a good friend. Being good friend is having a warm heart. Have a nice weekend sheila~ I pray for you about sun shine. : )

강사 첨삭

Fantastic job Simon! Happy Friday! This is the last day of the week so enjoy your weekend! See you next week!

~Teacher Sheila

It\'s not easy to answer the question.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It\'s not an easy question to answer.

To have a good friend, you need to be a good friend. I couldn\'t agree more.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I couldn\'t agree more to this statement.

A lot of people say \"I want a good friend.\"

>>CORRECT

That\'s all, they didn\'t do anything.

>>CORRECT

It is a selfish.

>>It is selfish.

Being good friend is something different.

>>CORRECT

I think that good friend is good listener and understand of heart.

>>I think that being a good friend is a good listener and understands your heart.

OR>>I think having a good friend who is a good listener can understands what is in my heart.

And we need love.

>>CORRECT

So, someone want to be a good friend, they have to be a good friend.

>>So, If someone wants to have a good friend, they have to be a good friend.

Being good friend is having a warm heart.

>>Being a good friend is having a warm heart.

OR>>Being a good friend means having a warm heart.

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