There's no place like home
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Hi there sir,
I like your closing today sir. It\'s a line from John Howard Payne\'s poem \"Home, Sweet Home\". I have experience being away from my home country for three years so I completely agree with you. Home, home, sweet, sweet home! There\'s no place like home, oh, there\'s no place like home!
See you on Friday sir!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Home is the most satisfying place to be.
>> correct!
But people are sometimes looking for something new.
>> correct!
When he(she) does, people leave home for the travel.
>> So people leave home to travel.
As soon as people left home, it begans trouble.
>> As soon as people leave their homes, trouble begins.
Bedroom is uncomfortable, food is not to his taste.
>> The bedroom is uncomfortable. The food is not to his taste.
All the things should be by himself.
>> He does everything by himself.
Staying away from home for a long time, people can feel homesick.
>> While staying away from home for a long time, people can feel homesickness.
There\'s nothing better than home.
>> correct!
Be it ever so humble, there\'s no place like home.
>> correct!
East or west, home is best.
>> correct!
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