There's no place like home

2016-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Home is the most satisfying place to be. But people are sometimes looking for something new. When he(she) does, people leave home for the travel. As soon as people left home, it begans trouble. Bedroom is uncomfortable, food is not to his taste. All the things should be by himself. Staying away from home for a long time, people can feel homesick. There's nothing better than home. Be it ever so humble, there's no place like home. East or west, home is best.

강사 첨삭

Hi there sir,

I like your closing today sir. It\'s a line from John Howard Payne\'s poem \"Home, Sweet Home\". I have experience being away from my home country for three years so I completely agree with you. Home, home, sweet, sweet home! There\'s no place like home, oh, there\'s no place like home!

See you on Friday sir!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Home is the most satisfying place to be.

>> correct!

But people are sometimes looking for something new.

>> correct!

When he(she) does, people leave home for the travel.

>> So people leave home to travel.

As soon as people left home, it begans trouble.

>> As soon as people leave their homes, trouble begins.

Bedroom is uncomfortable, food is not to his taste.

>> The bedroom is uncomfortable. The food is not to his taste.

All the things should be by himself.

>> He does everything by himself.

Staying away from home for a long time, people can feel homesick.

>> While staying away from home for a long time, people can feel homesickness.

There\'s nothing better than home.

>> correct!

Be it ever so humble, there\'s no place like home.

>> correct!

East or west, home is best.

>> correct!

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