There will be second earth in space
학생이 쓴 원문
I think we have to study about space. The resources of earth will disappear someday. Then human have to find some planet to live. Planet is in the space. Then we have to study about space to find the planet to live. Examples of we have to study are the way to go to space, space\'s dangers, lots of planets and many things. In conclusion, we have to study about space to prepare the New Earth.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daniel! Your homework is
well-organized and easy to understand. You
were able to use good expressions. Keep it up!
- Teacher Debbie
>> This is a good sentence!
The resources of earth will disappear someday.
>> This is a good sentence!
Then human have to find some planet to live.
>> Then humans would have to find some planet where they could live.
Planet is in the space.
>> Planets are in space.
Then we have to study about space to find the planet to live.
>> Therefore, we have to study about it to know where we could live.
Examples of we have to study are the way to go to space, space\'s dangers, lots of planets and many things.
>> Here are some of the things we have to study: ways to go to space, its dangers, planets, etc.
In conclusion, we have to study about space to prepare the New Earth.
>> This is a good sentence!
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