These are the rest of last homework, home work for today and electric shock part2

2013-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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last home work 9. Trademarks enable a company to distinguish its_ products from those_ of another company. 10. One cannot see through translucent materials, but light can pass through them_. I don't like ice-cream, but he does You don't need glasses, but I do Sally didn't enjoy the movies, but everyone else did Dave doesn't want to go out tonight, but his girlfriend does My parents don't live in England, but I do She doesn't smoke, but he does I don't know her very well, but my friends do This car doesn't go as fast as my old one does I don't type very well, but my boyfriend does He said he would do it and he did the joint of my rechager is corrupted so It is oftenly seperated whenever I want to use it. So I need a concentration before I use the recharger. On tuesday, It was seperated as usual. I disconnected electric power, at the same time recharger was disassembled. My finger flick the electric circuit. I felt pain and I threw it as soon as possible. It was awesome.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Happy Friday to you!^__^

You got the last two correct answers!^^

Well anyway, I have few corrections for your sentences below.

Check them out again for me please.^^

Good thing nothing terrible happened to you!

Do take good care of yourself and perhaps, you should buy a new \"charger\".^^

~t. Nina

last home work
9. Trademarks enable a company to distinguish its_ products from those_ of another company.

>>Correct!
10. One cannot see through translucent materials, but light can pass through them_.

>>Correct!
I don\'t like ice-cream, but he does
>>Correct!

You don\'t need glasses, but I do

>>Correct!
Sally didn\'t enjoy the movies, but everyone else did

>>Correct!
Dave doesn\'t want to go out tonight, but his girlfriend does

>>Correct!
My parents don\'t live in England, but I do

>>Correct!
She doesn\'t smoke, but he does

>>Correct!
I don\'t know her very well, but my friends do

>>Correct!
This car doesn\'t go as fast as my old one does

>>Correct!
I don\'t type very well, but my boyfriend does

>>Correct!
He said he would do it and he did
>>Correct!
the joint of my rechager is corrupted so It is oftenly seperated whenever I want to use it.

>>The joint of my recharger is corrupted, so it is separated whenever I want to use it.
So I need a concentration before I use the recharger.

>>So I need to concentrate before I recharge.
On tuesday, It was seperated as usual.

>>Correct! [Tuesday; separated]

OR>>Last Tuesday, it got separated again, as usual.

 I disconnected electric power, at the same time recharger was disassembled.

>>I disconnected it to the plug and at the same time, the recharger was disassembled.

My finger flick the electric circuit.

>>My finger flicked the electric circuit.
I felt pain and I threw it as soon as possible.

>>Correct!

OR>>I got hurt so I threw it soon as I can.

>>There was this painful sensation, so I immediately dropped it.^^
It was awesome.

>>Correct!^^

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