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I want to tell you about my new roommate. Actually I fight someone who lives in number 8 room last semester. She was awful. She was never mind other people so that I cautioned to her don't do that but she didn't care. This semester my new roommate lived in number 8 room. She was her roommate. I was scared about my terrible semester because I was sure they flourished. Fortunately, my new roommate hate her. I think that I'll have peaceful semester. I had homework, but I'm not sure I can marry. Sometimes I dreamed gorgeous single life. On the other hand, sometimes I dreamed happy married life. I think two children are good. I want to have one son and one daughter. I feel awkward to write in English after a long interval. I really really expect to our call. But I afraid that I'll shy again.

Hi [이름], I kept on laughing while reading your article. For university students this is very normal so I understand you Don’t worry. Just do your responsibilies and everything will be okay. Here are the corrections, Connie   I want to tell you about my new roommate. >> Correct  Actually I fight someone who lives in number 8 room last semester. >> Actually, I fought with someone who lives in room number 8 last semester. She was awful. She was never mind other people so that I cautioned to her don't do that but she didn't care. >> She is awful, she never mind of other people so I cautioned her not to do that but she didn’t care. This semester my new roommate lived in number 8 room. >> This semester my new room mate lived in room number 8 last semester.  She was her roommate. >> Correct I was scared about my terrible semester because I was sure they flourished. >> I was scared about my past terrible semester because I’m sure they still can remember it. Fortunately, my new roommate hate her. >> Fortunately, my new room mate hates her, too. I think that I'll have peaceful semester. >> CorrectI had homework, but I'm not sure I can marry. >> I had homework, but I’m not sure if I’ll be married. Sometimes I dreamed gorgeous single life. >> Sometimes, I dream of having a gorgeous single life. On the other hand, sometimes I dreamed happy married life. >> On the other hand, I sometimes dream of happy married life.  I think two children are good. >> Correct >> I think having two children are good. –>> better  I want to have one son and one daughter. >> Correct I feel awkward to write in English after a long interval. >> correct >> I feel awkward to write in English after a long time. I really really expect to our call. But I afraid that I'll shy again.>> I’m really looking forward to our class, but I’m sure that I’ll be shy again.