These days in Korea...
학생이 쓴 원문
These days in Korea,Its very free.
And I don't like that. Because,Everyone must work faithful
When I grow up,I want to be a English teacher.
And I grow up like that,I must work for the splendid children.
To be like that we must work!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I like the way you express yourself. I can tell that you are a very hardworking person. I hope to read more of your compositions. Anyway, here are some corrections I have made to your sentences: ^_^
These days in Korea,Its very free.
>>> These days, in Korea, it's very free.And I don't like that. Because,Everyone must work faithful
>>> And I don't like that because everyone must work faithfully.
>>> And I don't like that because everyone must work diligently.
When I grow up,I want to be a English teacher.
>>> When I grow up, I want to be an English teacher.And I grow up like that,I must work for the splendid children.
>>> When I grow up to be an English teacher, I must work for the splendid children.
>>> And when I become an English teacher, I must teach the splendid children well.To be like that we must work!!!
>>>Correct
>>> We must work hard like that.
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