These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you very much for doing your homework, Jason^^
Sometimes getting a new one also saves us some money, and of course, time, ha! ha!
Thankfully, with today\'s technology, everything is almost possible~
Before the technology had developed a lot, damaged things could have been made by simple to fix since it has easy to see and adjust because it had been consisted of rough elements.
>>Before technology was and it was easy to see and adjust because it had been consisted of rough elements.
But after PCB, Printed Circuit Board, and Nano elements were invented, it’s hard to understand and fix it without special tools.
>>CORRECT!
Furthermore, our old generation had considered first for the meals day by day since they didn’t have enough money to buy the foods.
>>Furthermore, our old generation had considered the meals day by day first, since they didn’t have enough money to buy the food.
So, they used to try fixing the things that had damaged to save money.
>>Therefore, they used to try fixing the things that had been damaged to save money.
On the other hands, young generations might have never thought the foods that they need to eat since they can buy or get any foods wherever and whenever they want.
>> On the other hand, young generation might have never thought the food that they need to eat since they can buy or get any food wherever and whenever they want.
I think the two thinks that I mentioned are the big differences.
>> I think the two ideas that I mentioned are the big differences.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.