They agree with me.

2023-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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They usually agree with me. Sometimes people don\'t agree with me, but it doesn\'t matter. I think the most important thing when giving an opinion is whether you can persuade people or not. So I think it\'s a good influence for many people to express their opinions.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름],

I wanted to tell you that your homework was great! I really liked how you said, \"Most of the time, people agree with me. Sometimes, they don\'t, but that\'s okay.\" It shows that you understand that not everyone will always agree with you, and that\'s normal. You also mentioned something important: when we give our opinion, it\'s essential to try and convince others to see our point of view. That means explaining our thoughts in a way that makes sense to them. This can have a positive impact on many people because it helps us share ideas and learn from each other. I want to encourage you to keep expressing your opinions. You\'re doing a fantastic job, and I\'m impressed by your thoughtful ideas. Keep it up!

~Teacher Cathy


They usually agree with me.

>>CORRECT

OR>>People agree with me most of the time.

Sometimes people don\'t agree with me, but it doesn\'t matter.

>>CORRECT

I think the most important thing when giving an opinion is whether you can persuade people or not.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe that the most important part when you share your thoughts is if you have the ability to persuade people or not.

So I think it\'s a good influence for many people to express their opinions.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Therefore, I think that allowing many individuals to voice their opinions is beneficial.

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