they already have launched flying cars. What are the pros and cons if several countries would launch
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Flying car sounds great! Developing technology, several countries can make a flying cars soon. It will be awesome. Traffic will be more crowded, but still there are too many cars on street. Send some cars to the air, that’ll reduce traffic jam.
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Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the topic.
Here are my corrections.
Flying car sounds great!
>> Correct!
>> OR: Flying cars sounds terrific!
Developing technology, several countries can make a flying cars soon. It will be awesome.
>> Through the rapid development of technologies, several countries can make flying cars soon. It will be awesome.
Traffic will be more crowded, but still there are too many cars on street.
>>Traffic will be more crowded, but still there are too many cars on the street.
Send some cars to the air, that’ll reduce traffic jam.
>>Send some cars into the air, that’ll reduce traffic jam.
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